tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6424945399751711526.post8765526912287969873..comments2023-08-13T08:27:47.424-04:00Comments on Penguin Poems: SandcastleAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10871149420280457991noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6424945399751711526.post-14176538085157036492012-03-04T23:24:08.142-05:002012-03-04T23:24:08.142-05:00Andrew, this was so short I overlooked it. What a...Andrew, this was so short I overlooked it. What a beautiful poem, the imagined moment of a perfect coupling. And the breath, "rising and falling - for you," as if it's not only the exhalation, but the actual falling in love.<br /><br />Sublime. Peace, Amy<br />http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/03/02/twofer-six-wd-sat-and-carnegie-hall/Sharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.comnoreply@blogger.com