tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6424945399751711526.post8986939556222018775..comments2023-08-13T08:27:47.424-04:00Comments on Penguin Poems: Flood PlainAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10871149420280457991noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6424945399751711526.post-83996104628777125622011-08-19T13:05:40.045-04:002011-08-19T13:05:40.045-04:00Fine piece. Just to let you know, your URL/link wa...Fine piece. Just to let you know, your URL/link was incorrect, which is why no comment via d'Verse. I've edited it now and informed Avril who is critiquing this one. Looks good, Andrew<br /><br />regards<br /><br />LukeLuke Praterhttp://lukepraterswordsalad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6424945399751711526.post-23687228342361029272011-05-21T18:23:28.930-04:002011-05-21T18:23:28.930-04:00The simplicity of the language and the setting up ...The simplicity of the language and the setting up of the last line by the two earlier repetitions work so well. A finely made poem, this.Dick Joneshttp://patteran.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.com